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| | Incredible work once again,always love reading your stories |
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| | I thought it was very good. Look forward to more |
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| | Very good once again look forward to more |
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| | Really good, a few times youve put "his" instead of "hers" but other than that your grammar and stuff are good |
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| | Great chapter once again always look forward to reading them |
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| | This seems like the start of a really good series! |
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| I enjoyed it, would probably say make them a bit longer and maybe more descriptive but other than that very good.
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| | Cant belive how long its been, really hope you carry on with this amazing series |
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| | Although I dont read your fanfics i have always seen you as a large part of this community and i think its great that you are trying to get your life back on track if you will. I wish you the absolute best in your efforts |
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| | Loved every part so far. Good work |
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| One night with Mandy
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5 mins with Bayley naked
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10 mins with Charlotte fully clothed |
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| We need to get this going again. And due to the fact that no one seems willing to answer the last one ill kick things off with a new set.
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| | This series is absolutely amazing so far cant wait for more |
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